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Re: Panalangin. [love. happiness. friendship.]
« Reply #15 on: September 16, 2006, 08:32:42 am »
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Re: Panalangin. [love. happiness. friendship.]
« Reply #16 on: September 16, 2006, 11:43:47 am »
CHAPTER 3: SUPRISES


BLUE'S POV

Heto ako. Katabi si Jhay Co. Di ni nga sya naka harap sa akin ehh. Ganun ba talaga sya kagalit sa akin? Nakalimutan ko na nga yung kiss na yun ehh. Though sya rin ang first kiss ko. Haha. Ssssh. I know I know.  A guy talking about his first kiss. So what? Yun ang totoo at di ko ikakahiya yun. Theres nothing better than the first kiss.

Huie pare. Kanina pa kita kinakausap. Ano ba?

Si Greese pala yun. Sya kase ang naka upo sa harap ko. Isa pa tong mokong nato. Napaka kulit pero in a way I envy him, magkaibigan kasi sila ni Jhay. Heto nga oh nagtatawanan. Don't get me wrong. Gusto ko lang na kaibigan ko ang lahat. Oo kaibigan lang, i guess.

Ano nga yung sinasabi mo?

Sabi ko anong pipiliin mo, basketball or soccer?

Basketball syempre. Dun ko inubos summer ko noh.

HAAY SALAMAT! Wala ng asungot sa team namin. Whew.

Pare, may narinig ka ba? Parang may joiners kasi ehh.

HAAY. Hangin nga naman. Nakatapat lahat sa akin. Wooo.

TUMAHIMIK KAYO! Tama na yan. Baka magkatotoo pa sinabi ni Mr. L.

ANO?

SIYA?

WAG NA NOH.


For Pete's sake. Kung magaasawa ako, yun na lang ding mabait at sweet noh. Though I find her pretty pero mabait? Sweet? Ewan ko. Malay ba. Di ako magsasalita ng patapos, we never know









I can fall for her.



*may kadugtong pa to just wait. :]
« Last Edit: September 16, 2006, 11:46:09 am by vainballerina »
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Re: Panalangin. [love. happiness. friendship.]
« Reply #17 on: September 16, 2006, 12:06:02 pm »
your story's awesome!!! its cool!!! IDK what 2 say anymore!!! next!!! i really love it!! i really wanna see d next!!! TTFN!!!
The best part in the word believe is the word LIE.... BeLIEve.. ;)

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Re: Panalangin. [love. happiness. friendship.]
« Reply #18 on: September 16, 2006, 01:23:39 pm »
your story's awesome!!! its cool!!! IDK what 2 say anymore!!! next!!! i really love it!! i really wanna see d next!!! TTFN!!!

thanks dear! i'll make the continuation na. tata! :*
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Re: Panalangin. [love. happiness. friendship.]
« Reply #19 on: September 16, 2006, 01:56:17 pm »
After that conversation with Jhay and Greese, umuwi naku. Half day lang because the school wants to give time sa new and old students to find their clubs, respective rooms for different subjects and of course for them to make friends. Ako? Ito papunta sa bahay. I have my club na, I know my sched and of course the rooms.

Pagbaba ko ng car, una kong nakita syempre ang mom and dad ko. Wait. This is awkward, sinasalubong ako ng parents ko and they have this smile na nakakasuspense. Hmmm.

What now ma, dad? Another future wife for me and another business for you guys, yun ba yun?

Shoti, we'll meet her later. Good thing half day lang kayo. So, get ready na dear.

Yeah mom.

Di na ako naki pag-away alam ko naman si mommy parin mananalo ehh. She always win porke't she knows best raw. Oh well. Let's see. First girl I met was, Jenny Anderson. We didn't work out so di ko sya pinapansin. Second girl was, Leila Teng. Wala parin. That girl was one whore. Yuck! The last girl I met? Cindy. The bestest girl mom and dad arranged me. Pero the problem was my boyfriend sya. Mahal nya ko, oo. As a bestfriend. Hirap nga ehh. Kung kailan malapit na ko mahulog sa kanya, dun pa nila kinut-off yung engagement. Cindy has another men in her heart. What can I do? Di sumangayon. Wala akong nagagawa nun kung di umo-o. Maybe she isn't the one.

Ma, I'm done.

Good shoti. Let's go dad?

Sure. Tara na anak. I bet you'll love her.


I just flashed them a smile. Napapagod narin ako sa ganito. Bakit ba di na lang kami maghintay. Parati rin yan sinasabi ni dad "I'll bet you'll lover her." Narining ko na yan. Like, 4th this time? Hmm. Here we go.....



Jhay's POV

Heto ako, naka upo sa soccer field after that conversation with Greese and his annoying friend Blue. Uggh! I hate that guy. Bakit ba sya  pa kasi naging seat mate ko. Oh my. Padating na si Louise. By the way, co-player ko sya sa soccer team. And I have a crush on him like 5months na? Oo. Matagal-tagal narin.

Hey Jhay. Bakit di ka pa umuuwi? Dba tumawag dad mo kanina?

Yeahh. Pauwi na nga rin ako ehh. Ikaw, bat nandito ka?

Gusto ko kasing kausapin si Thea ehh. Pero di ko sya nakita kanina. Nakita mo ba sya?

Wala ehh. Sige Lou, una na ko. Bye.

So, I walked papunta sa gate. Thea, Thea, Thea. Puro na lang sya Thea. Ano ba nakita nya kay Thea? That girl is pure evil, not to mention a whore. Bahala si Louise. It's his lost, not mine. Pauwi naku, and here is my dad. Waiting for me dahil may lakad raw kami. What now? Another business meeting and family gathering. Grrr. But I love my dad, this would be the only way I could repay him and his deeds.

Dad, I'm done. Let's go.

Sure hija. You look beautiful and you'll always be one.

Dad, your making me blush. Tara na.











Who would be the lucky guy this time?
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Re: Panalangin. [love. happiness. friendship.]
« Reply #20 on: September 16, 2006, 02:16:09 pm »
*if red then naka italic, thoughts ni Jhay, if blue then italic kay Blue. oks? hehe. :]

CHAPTER 4: WILL IT BE?


Sino kaya sya? Maganda kaya sya? Mabait? Sweet? Understanding? Or mayabang? Masungit? Haay. Ano ba. Bakit ako kinakabahan? Why is it like this? Di naman ganito naramdaaman ko before ko makilala si Jenny, Leila either Cindy. Come what may God...


Who is he? Will he be the one? Sana di sya arrogante or what. I hope makasundo ko sya. Ugggh. Bakit ako kinakabahan? Act normal JHANA CO. Act normal! Hmmm.


Matututunan ko kaya syang mahalin?

Mahahalin nya kaya ako?

Tatagal kaya kami?

Sana magtagal kami kung sya na nga talaga.

Sana mapalitan na nya si Cindy sa puso ko.

Sana mapalitan na nya si Louise sa puso ko.

Sana....








SIYA NA ANG PANALANGIN KO.


*continuation later :]
« Last Edit: September 16, 2006, 02:22:35 pm by vainballerina »
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Re: Panalangin. [love. happiness. friendship.]
« Reply #21 on: September 16, 2006, 03:12:42 pm »
wahahaha.. both of them?!?!?!?! hihihihi.... next na po!!! please!!! i beg of ya!!! hihi.. good luck 2 both of them :P
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Re: Panalangin. [love. happiness. friendship.]
« Reply #22 on: September 16, 2006, 05:23:51 pm »
wahahaha.. both of them?!?!?!?! hihihihi.... next na po!!! please!!! i beg of ya!!! hihi.. good luck 2 both of them :P

onga ehh. good luck sa kanila. haha. lol. :]


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Re: Panalangin. [love. happiness. friendship.]
« Reply #23 on: September 16, 2006, 05:46:16 pm »
next na hehehe
...Tonight I've fallen and I can't get up
I need your loving hands to come and pick me up
And every night I miss you
I can just look up
and know the stars are
holdin' you tonight...

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Re: Panalangin. [love. happiness. friendship.]
« Reply #24 on: September 16, 2006, 06:10:36 pm »
Blue's POV

Nandito na kami sa resto. Waiting for, ano nga uli apilido nila? Pssh. I forgot. Basta we're waiting for them to arrive.

Shoti, are you ready? Nasa may lobby na raw sila. Papunta na.

Yes mom. I'm ready and I'll be ready for the-famous-girl-my-mom-has-been-talking.

They're here. Stand up. Ayusin mo itsura mo.

Tumalikod ako para ayusing yung polo ko.

Nice to meet you tita, tito. And he is?

Wait...I know this voice. Si..

Jhana Co?

YOU?!

So I guess you both know each other?

Dad, he is the guy I told you who kissed me nung soccer game last year.

Ikaw pala yun hija? My son told me about it.

Parang mukhang masaya pa ho kayo nun?

Ehh pano ba naman. Mas madadalian pala tayo ngayon. Kasi you know each other na. Mas madali ang kasal.

KASAL? ANONG KASAL? DAD?!!

Naupo ako. Anong ginagawa ko? Nagpapakitang relax lang ang feeling ko para naman di nya isipin na natetense rin ako. Nakakahiya kaya.

Bakit di mo ba alam? Don't act blind Jhay. Ayaw mo nun, first kiss mo magiging asawa mo? Sabay ngiti ng nakakaloko.

Ang kapal mo rin noh! Dad, Tita, Tito. I can't and I won't marry him. NEVER!

Anak, you can't back out. Na pagusapan na lahat. Mr&Mrs. Tan and I will go to London bukas na. Blue will move to our house tomorrow. Be nice hija. Okay?

WHAT? PAANO SI ACHI DAD? WALA TO SA USAPAN.

Okay. I agreed with the marrige thingy but me moving out to the Co's residence? What the?

Shoti, your achi is coming with us. Remember she's studying at London? So para mas madali you and Jhay will live together.

NAH-UUH. NO and NEVER. Daaaad?

Hija, we can't do anything. Na fix na lahat. We planned this months ago. So no backing out.

And hija, don't worry if you guys won't work out pagbalik namin dito. We will call it off. Okay?

When will you go back?
She faced my mom, my dad and her dad with this lonely face and eyes shimmering. Sinagot nga ni God yung mga hiling ko na maganda pero mabait ba `to? Lets see.

November. Will it be okay with you?

Okay. What else can I do nga ba? Dad, take care okay? And please don't do this again.

I won't. Don't worry. Her dad kissed her forehead. Halatang close sila.

And for you hijo, pack your stuffs later and you'll start living with Jhay, okay?

But dad...

No buts. You will and be good okay?

Okay. Okay. I will.


So, may day went good knowing that my seat mate is my worst enemy. Then my afternoon was quite okay knowing that my future wife will be my worst enemy and now? I'M GOING TO LIVE WITH MY WORST ENEMY. Siya na nga ba








ang panalangin ng puso ko?
« Last Edit: September 16, 2006, 06:13:29 pm by vainballerina »
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Re: Panalangin. [love. happiness. friendship.]
« Reply #25 on: September 16, 2006, 06:11:33 pm »
next na hehehe

ayan na. it's up. hehehe. hope yah like it. :]


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Re: Panalangin. [love. happiness. friendship.]
« Reply #26 on: September 16, 2006, 06:27:44 pm »
Hi sis..ganda aman ng story mo! Pareho pa sila ng iniisip sa huli..Kristine nga po pala name ko..friends? wala pa po ko friend dito weh...

tsaka po pabasa na din ng story na pinost ko dito din sa may creative corner..Battle Between Royalties po yung title..basahin mo po wah? Thanks! Support ko to!
i flipped up cards and saw hearts;
i folded said i dont deal with LOVE.

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Re: Panalangin. [love. happiness. friendship.]
« Reply #27 on: September 16, 2006, 06:29:13 pm »
Hi sis..ganda aman ng story mo! Pareho pa sila ng iniisip sa huli..Kristine nga po pala name ko..friends? wala pa po ko friend dito weh...

tsaka po pabasa na din ng story na pinost ko dito din sa may creative corner..Battle Between Royalties po yung title..basahin mo po wah? Thanks! Support ko to!

of course sis. friends na tayo! cge cge. i'll read and support ur story. thanks rin sa pagbasa! mwah.


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Re: Panalangin. [love. happiness. friendship.]
« Reply #28 on: September 16, 2006, 06:32:44 pm »
Tanong ko lang din po kung lam nyo po kung pano maglagay ng story dun sa List..hindi po kasi ako maalam weh.. :-[

Yipee! May friend na rin ako sa wakas! Sige..suportahan tayo ng story..
i flipped up cards and saw hearts;
i folded said i dont deal with LOVE.

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Re: Panalangin. [love. happiness. friendship.]
« Reply #29 on: September 16, 2006, 06:38:47 pm »
Tanong ko lang din po kung lam nyo po kung pano maglagay ng story dun sa List..hindi po kasi ako maalam weh.. :-[

Yipee! May friend na rin ako sa wakas! Sige..suportahan tayo ng story..

what list dear? yung sa creative corner? naka order kasi yan sa pagpost ng tao. yung may latest post un ung nauuna. is that what you mean?

of course. friends na tayo.

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